I keep trying to expand that story snippet I wrote about one of the secondary characters from my clone’s latest WiP. It’s not working. It probably isn’t necessary, anyway, but I would like to have something to offer as a freebie tie-in once the book is published.
Maybe the trouble is that I polished and pared it down too much from the beginning. I could elaborate on just about everything that happens in the snippet, but… I don’t know. Maybe I should get LR’s opinion. He’s got a real knack for epic stories, so if anyone can tell me how to turn 2000 words into 8000, it’s him.
Eh. Maybe all I need is a conclusion, instead of the sudden stop the snippet has right now.