BONUS — because the last “writing glitch” was all about a topic I’ve discussed a lot already (and will continue to discuss until I stop seeing that particular error everywhere).
Today’s SECOND glitch:
Well, there’s the obvious: capitalize the first word of every sentence. Also, apostrophes are not for plurals, but they are for possessives, and compound sentences (yes, that again) require commas.
You and four others are locked in a room. You have no food or drink, only the clothes on your back. There’s a number on each person’s wrist, and a piece of paper on the floor says only, “She’s older than me.”