I’d really appreciate it if the intrepid beta readers for Project Brimstone could get their comments back to me sometime in the next day or two.
At this very moment, the clone is in the back yard (yes, back yard, two words — backyard is an adjective, and it’s a sign of how annoying I find this common error that I’m interrupting this post to give a hasty grammar lesson/mini-rant), doing something that involves making Medieval-style eating utensils out of metal and deer antler. *shrug* But he did read the comments from the beta reader who’s already responded, and he has already thought about those comments and decided that a few things do need to be changed/clarified in the manuscript.
Oh, yeah — I guess I can tell you (in case I haven’t already mentioned it elsewhere) that the short story I’ve been trying to complete is about Raven (character in Project Brimstone). It may end up getting used as a freebie for people who sign up for Paul’s mailing list, or something like that.