This one is small (and I’ve been away for a few days, editing a massive manuscript), so you’ll be getting two today.
Today’s first glitch:
Change the comma after shoulders to a period. This example contains a comma splice, which is what we call it when two complete sentences (not sentence fragments) are incorrectly joined with a comma.
“She walked with darkness dripping off her shoulders. I’ve seen ghosts brighter than her soul.”