I decided to use the original version for this one, because it has a dragon in it.
As written, that sentence says the public shoots fireballs.
I’m fairly sure they don’t, though. (Look at those people. Do any of them appear to be shooting fireballs?)
Corrected versions:
Russian village of Kamenka unveils to the public their three-headed dragon statue, which shoots real fireballs.
or
Russian village of Kamenka unveils their three-headed dragon statue, which shoots real fireballs, to the public.
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About Thomas Weaver
For several years, I’ve been putting my uncanny knack for grammar and punctuation, along with an eclectic mental collection of facts, to good use as a Wielder of the Red Pen of Doom (editor).
I'm physically disabled, and I currently live with my smugly good-looking twin Paul, who writes military science fiction and refuses to talk about his military service because he can’t. Sometimes Paul and I collaborate on stories, and sometimes I just edit whatever he writes. It's worked out rather well so far.
My list of non-writing-related jobs from the past includes librarian, art model, high school teacher, science lab gofer… Although I have no spouse or offspring to tell you about, I do have eight cats. I currently spend my time blogging, reading, editing, and fending off cats who like my desk better than my twin’s.
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